Comments on: Page 100! http://www.jaydenandcrusader.com/2008/12/01/page-100/ The Ensuing Tales of Jayden and Crusader Tue, 07 Feb 2012 19:38:02 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Andrew (Aflowerchild) http://www.jaydenandcrusader.com/2008/12/01/page-100/comment-page-1/#comment-106 Andrew (Aflowerchild) Sun, 07 Dec 2008 18:58:37 +0000 http://www.jaydenandcrusader.com/2008/12/01/page-100/#comment-106 I didn't see that coming at all and I'm pretty interested in seeing where you're going with it (assuming you know yourself, if you're anything like me you wouldn't have a clue). I agree with you on the art of this page, it's pretty good but not fantastic. A few small things are that I did actually notice Kat was looking quite small and in the 4th and 6th panels how she's kneeling on the seat looks a little odd. Other than that the characters are drawn very well. The background isn't all that interesting, although as it's in a cinema I don't think there's much you could do. If you're really not happy with it, seeing as it's your 100th, you could always redraw it. I think it's fine though. I didn’t see that coming at all and I’m pretty interested in seeing where you’re going with it (assuming you know yourself, if you’re anything like me you wouldn’t have a clue).

I agree with you on the art of this page, it’s pretty good but not fantastic. A few small things are that I did actually notice Kat was looking quite small and in the 4th and 6th panels how she’s kneeling on the seat looks a little odd. Other than that the characters are drawn very well.
The background isn’t all that interesting, although as it’s in a cinema I don’t think there’s much you could do.

If you’re really not happy with it, seeing as it’s your 100th, you could always redraw it. I think it’s fine though.

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