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August 4th, 2008

He rents a closet upstairs

Rating 4.33 out of 5

Poor Crusader, whenever he’s acting perfectly rationally everyone else has gone insane.

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I quite enjoyed drawing this page. While there are a lot of problems with it, including one or two scripting issues, I love how Jayden came out in each panel, especially in Panel 5 where we can see she really does have shoes,  unlike all those other times we’ve seen her with just foot shaped blocks.

Unfortunately characters like Third and Jayden’s parents still have inconsistencies… I keep trying to work on those. Also the holes in Third’s jacket have mysteriously disappeared, along with the blood stains. I would say a wizard did it, but that’s far too cliche

It was invisible nano-robots.

You will notice, I imagine, that the angrier Jayden gets, the longer and bushier her hair gets, until in panel 5 it’s almost as though there is a porcupine sitting on her back. I think this is something left over from the Ozimaar incident, which, by the way, I am still drawing. So if you find J&Cs story confusing, hopefully by the end of the summer it will make sense.

I hope anyway….

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  1. Emily
    August 15th, 2008 at 11:41 pm

    Raaargh!! :) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):)

  2. Jayden and Crusader – Updates Mondays & Fridays » Archive » Page 128
    August 10th, 2009 at 12:05 am

    [...] I like this page. I like this page a lot. It has Dr. Cartwright. That alone is enough to make it awesome for me. Furthermore, Third is great in this comic, I think.  And blood, so much blood. I don’t think blood has been in J&C since this time last year. [...]

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