Please Don’t Kill Me
(The Title’s Please Don’t Kill me, have I already used that? I think I have, I dunno…)
Another late update…
*repeatedly bashes head against the wall in shame*
It’s still friday here… and at least everywhere west of here, but for any of my readers were it is now Saturday I apologise.
(in case you hadn’t guessed over the last few weeks, I update on Mondays and Fridays)
I am frequently told off by my friends for how infrequently I shave. I once left it about 3 months before I finally found my razor (inside my printer?) and culled the ginger blond fuzz and this (and my long hair) is probably my most slob like tendancy, as I like to keep clean in general, both me and the area I inhabit.
This comic took a while to think up, I wanted to put more dialogue in, but that would ruin the punchline, and I wanted a punchline because, well, I almost always have a punchline. A Jayden and Crusader strip without a punchline is like, well, almost the entire contents of the Lost Archive. And so I came to the comprimise of four panels, and will probably poor my exposition in somewhere else, When I feel less tired. I am tired because I went to London Wednesday and Thursday (another reason this is so late) and am thourally exhausted. You can have a blog post in a few minutes as to my report on London, but some of this stuff really needs pictures, which highlights and underlines my need for a digital camera. I’ve seen a really nice Kodak one at Argos I might get but…. ooh its expensive…
Blarg… Comic. You read. Laughter optional. Me go elsewhere.
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July 26th, 2008 at 11:03 am
This comic’s good, all the characters are looking good (except perhaps them having a slightly small head in the first panel, although they’re great in the third). The hug looks good too, and I wouldn’t be suprised if it didn’t as you don’t do too many two-character poses. So that’s good.
Is that a hallway in the final panel? Whether it is or not it can sometimes look a little empty in comparison to some other locations. It’s ok when there’s lots of characters to fill the space but when there’s not it looks like it could do with a table or lamp or some other kind of scenery, although I like the pictures on the walls.