Oh God!
And so we continue.
I had originally intended to have Crusader’s parents come into the comic before Jayden’s, but as Jayden’s parents don’t live 3000 miles away, I suppose it makes more sense for them to be in the comic first.
This comic also demonstrates accents! Crusader is using British Spelling while Jayden uses American. I will be trying to do this from now on, if you catch me having missed a spelling change (give a guy a break, I am British), tell me and I’ll put it right.
Speech bubbles were broken in the first upload, I fixed that soon after, but apologies if you saw that version.
I don’t know if you can actually use cream to make a cake. I always use milk, but I assume you can use cream or something. Or at the very least they make an interesting filling (although if they were solely for filling that is a lot of cake indeed).
Artistically, I dislike Jayden in this comic, I’ve been a little out of practice for drawing her, but I’m sure it’ll all come back to me soon. It usually does. It also occurred to me the other day that the comic is called Jayden and Crusader but recently the main humour has between Third and Smic, I want to bring that back round to the play off between Jayden and Crusader.
Also Johnathon, aka Kirrus, the almighty webmaster, recommends I bring Kat into the story more to bring in the furry crowd. I am not ruling it out, but I am not sure. We’ll see. Indeed.
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July 18th, 2008 at 5:10 pm
I know that feeling
I can never remember what day it is
July 20th, 2008 at 12:15 pm
Despite what you say, I think Jayden’s looking pretty good in this comic, especially in the first and fifth panels. Crusader’s looking great too, your consistency’s really come a long way.
It’ll be good to see some new characters too, I remember the sketches being pretty good. How long will Jayden’s family be around?
Did you notice how you didn’t even have to ask for a comment this time? Looks like you’re finally getting through to me.
July 20th, 2008 at 1:10 pm
Thanks Aflowerchild.
Jayden’s family will be around for three or four comics, I’ve got a few ideas for them.